To get the ball rolling.
May. 29th, 2005 04:12 pmTitle: An Ending that leads to a Beginning
Rating: Safe for All
Words: 100
Characters: snupin
Notes: Not my best, but I liked it enough to post it.
It was over. This had been the moment he had waited for, and it was nothing like heβd expected it to be. In a moment with a bright light and death Severus had realized that he became useless. He no longer had a purpose other than to teach the dunderheads of Hogwarts. The he saw him β Remus β lying a pool of blood, with his eyes nearly glazed over. Without thinking, he reached Remus. He was still breathing. Saving Remus became his purpose. Keeping Remus safe was now his task β if Remus would allow him to do what he had planned.
Now you post something better ... I know you can. And thanks for the team name suggestions. When we get a few more, I'll set up a poll to vote.
Rating: Safe for All
Words: 100
Characters: snupin
Notes: Not my best, but I liked it enough to post it.
It was over. This had been the moment he had waited for, and it was nothing like heβd expected it to be. In a moment with a bright light and death Severus had realized that he became useless. He no longer had a purpose other than to teach the dunderheads of Hogwarts. The he saw him β Remus β lying a pool of blood, with his eyes nearly glazed over. Without thinking, he reached Remus. He was still breathing. Saving Remus became his purpose. Keeping Remus safe was now his task β if Remus would allow him to do what he had planned.
Now you post something better ... I know you can. And thanks for the team name suggestions. When we get a few more, I'll set up a poll to vote.
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Date: 2005-05-29 08:23 pm (UTC)Re: What do you mean?
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