ext_128243 ([identity profile] sapphiretragedy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] snupin1002005-05-29 04:12 pm

To get the ball rolling.

Title: An Ending that leads to a Beginning
Rating: Safe for All
Words: 100
Characters: snupin
Notes: Not my best, but I liked it enough to post it.

It was over. This had been the moment he had waited for, and it was nothing like he’d expected it to be. In a moment with a bright light and death Severus had realized that he became useless. He no longer had a purpose other than to teach the dunderheads of Hogwarts. The he saw him – Remus – lying a pool of blood, with his eyes nearly glazed over. Without thinking, he reached Remus. He was still breathing. Saving Remus became his purpose. Keeping Remus safe was now his task – if Remus would allow him to do what he had planned.


Now you post something better ... I know you can. And thanks for the team name suggestions. When we get a few more, I'll set up a poll to vote.

What do you mean?

[identity profile] nijijin.livejournal.com 2005-05-29 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I like it very much. This is a perfect piece for a remix. Would love to see Severus nursing Remus back to health and more.

Re: What do you mean?

[identity profile] nijijin.livejournal.com 2005-05-30 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
A remix can be a couple of things. In this case it's when a drabble is expanded into a full blown story.