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Title: Pained Eyes
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: Change
Characters: Remus/Severus



“I can’t do this anymore, Severus,” the voice was pained.
Severus cuddled up next to his partner, his hand lay delicately across his chest, marred with a few fresh scratches and fading scars. He tenderly kissed his neck and behind his ears, where he sometimes liked to be scratched.
“And do I look like the kind of man that can be intimidated?” the potion’s master whispered softly.
He received a nuzzle and felt practiced fingers run through his hair.
“I’m sorry Severus, I can’t.”
He looked into Remus’ sad eyes and felt a pain beyond anything Lord Voldemort could bestow.

Date: 2006-08-03 06:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonlit.livejournal.com
So sad but lovely! The image of Severus' pain as he stared into Remus' eyes was perfect. The image of him scratching behind Remus' ears was endearing. Great job.

Date: 2006-08-03 08:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, so sad, but Snape will look afer him no matter what. Lovely.

And welcome to the community!

Pained Eyes

Date: 2006-09-09 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rowanheart24.livejournal.com
Heartwrenchingly beautiful!

Date: 2008-02-17 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firefly124.livejournal.com
Oh, how sad. I love the way you've contrasted the familiarity of their caresses with Remus' words and the pain they cause.

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