ext_74774 ([identity profile] oirowin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] snupin1002006-08-02 12:59 pm
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Title: Pained Eyes
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: Change
Characters: Remus/Severus



“I can’t do this anymore, Severus,” the voice was pained.
Severus cuddled up next to his partner, his hand lay delicately across his chest, marred with a few fresh scratches and fading scars. He tenderly kissed his neck and behind his ears, where he sometimes liked to be scratched.
“And do I look like the kind of man that can be intimidated?” the potion’s master whispered softly.
He received a nuzzle and felt practiced fingers run through his hair.
“I’m sorry Severus, I can’t.”
He looked into Remus’ sad eyes and felt a pain beyond anything Lord Voldemort could bestow.

[identity profile] dragonlit.livejournal.com 2006-08-03 06:20 am (UTC)(link)
So sad but lovely! The image of Severus' pain as he stared into Remus' eyes was perfect. The image of him scratching behind Remus' ears was endearing. Great job.
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2006-08-03 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, so sad, but Snape will look afer him no matter what. Lovely.

And welcome to the community!

Pained Eyes

[identity profile] rowanheart24.livejournal.com 2006-09-09 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
Heartwrenchingly beautiful!

[identity profile] firefly124.livejournal.com 2008-02-17 02:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, how sad. I love the way you've contrasted the familiarity of their caresses with Remus' words and the pain they cause.