On the Couch

[stoicstella.livejournal.com]

Title: On the Couch
Word-count: 100
Challenge: Every Man has his faults

So, I have a tendency to feel sorry for myself and dwell in the past, and maybe I am passive aggressive and moody... but he is cold and sarcastic and bitingly cruel to everyone... including himself, and if he cared half as much as I do, he would take better care of himself: wash his hair, eat better, and sleep normal hours.

... and he could tell me he loved me when it wasn't a special occasion like a holiday or a near-death-experience, and he could say he's sorry even if he's not... Like I would.

Comments

[severity-softly.livejournal.com]

This is so perfect. Fits them perfectly. How Remus is both concerned for him and also slightly bitter. Very very well done! Bittersweet.

[stoicstella.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

lol! Two grumpy men. Perfect.