[identity profile] theladyfeylene.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] snupin100
Title: The Morning After
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Pairing: Severus/Remus
Challenge: morning after

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Remus ached. Every fiber of his being ached. His muscles were strained and his tendons burned. It was typical of the morning after his transformation, the pain that seeped into every part of his body. Generally he woke up on the floor which only added stiffness to his grab bag of physical discomforts.

This morning he was in his bed. He opened his eyes, confused and disoriented at waking up where he hadn’t fallen asleep. He certainly hadn’t tucked himself comfortably under the covers.

It was then that his nose registered the familiar scent of potions, clinging to his sheets.

Date: 2006-01-27 05:41 pm (UTC)
ext_2023: (dance with me by veryvisual)
From: [identity profile] etrangere.livejournal.com
How sweet and heart warming ^^

Date: 2006-01-27 05:42 pm (UTC)
ext_18428: (nested hearts by dalhessian)
From: [identity profile] rivendellrose.livejournal.com
Eeeeee. Ah, I still love that pairing oh-so-very-much. That was very nice, understated, and thoughtful. ♥

Date: 2006-01-27 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] climbatize.livejournal.com
I just clicked on the cut out of curiosity, but... ♥
This is wonderful.

*runs off to see if you've written more of this pairing*

Date: 2006-01-27 07:43 pm (UTC)
lore: (Lupin/Snape - Romance)
From: [personal profile] lore
Up to a point. Another project I need to get on....

His muscles were strained and his tendons burned.

I particularly liked this line. It was a very descriptive piece, overall, too. <3 <3 <3

love, lore

Date: 2006-01-27 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karasu-hime.livejournal.com
Yay for revisiting main pairings!

I do love your snape/lupin writings!

I like to think that after he registered where he was he went back to sleep peacefully.

Date: 2006-01-27 11:10 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (keira by pax89)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, that was so sweet.

Date: 2006-01-28 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diea.livejournal.com
I always say, it's the last sentence of a drabble that really decides if it works or not. This one is so spot on. *fangirls*

Date: 2006-01-28 08:07 am (UTC)
ext_23477: (Snupin)
From: [identity profile] dizilla.livejournal.com
*hee* Perfect! ^_^

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