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snupin100Thirty Below Bloody Freezing
Word Count: 156
Rating: G
Challenge: Snow.
Characters: Remus and Severus.
Authors Notes: My first contribution here, I do believe. Sorry I went over 100 words - I couldn't help myself.
"You shouldn't be out here."
The voice came from somewhere behind his shoulder, but Remus didn't need to glance back to know who it belonged to. A smile ghosted his cold lips.
"Where should I be, then?"
"Don't play daft with me, Lupin," the voice said tersely. It was closer now, he could sense. "You should be inside, where it isn't thirty below bloody freezing."
"Alright." Remus turned around to face Severus, who had already opened his mouth to say something else, but promptly shut it when he realised the other man had given in.
"You're-" He began to say, but Remus cut in.
"Going to go back to the castle." And softly, "with you."
Thin lips pressed together, eyes searched for meaning. Seconds seemed to stretch into minutes, and then abruptly, without another word, Severus started off. Pulling his cloak closer to fend off the chill of the snow, Remus hastened after, feeling warmer already.
Word Count: 156
Rating: G
Challenge: Snow.
Characters: Remus and Severus.
Authors Notes: My first contribution here, I do believe. Sorry I went over 100 words - I couldn't help myself.
"You shouldn't be out here."
The voice came from somewhere behind his shoulder, but Remus didn't need to glance back to know who it belonged to. A smile ghosted his cold lips.
"Where should I be, then?"
"Don't play daft with me, Lupin," the voice said tersely. It was closer now, he could sense. "You should be inside, where it isn't thirty below bloody freezing."
"Alright." Remus turned around to face Severus, who had already opened his mouth to say something else, but promptly shut it when he realised the other man had given in.
"You're-" He began to say, but Remus cut in.
"Going to go back to the castle." And softly, "with you."
Thin lips pressed together, eyes searched for meaning. Seconds seemed to stretch into minutes, and then abruptly, without another word, Severus started off. Pulling his cloak closer to fend off the chill of the snow, Remus hastened after, feeling warmer already.
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Date: 2005-12-03 04:47 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2005-12-03 06:59 pm (UTC)No probs with the word count but in future can you try and keep it to only twenty or so above 100 if you do go over. Thanks :)