Prompt #148 - Trust

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Title:  Trust
Author:  red_day_dawning
Challenge/Prompt: trust
Word count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: JKR, Bloomsbury Publishing and Warner Brothers own the HP copyright.

Familiar only with touch accompanied by pain, and caresses that tore skin and flesh, Severus did not like sex.  It tore open forgotten wounds, ripped the skin off healed scabs; it signified pain, a loss of control. 

Severus never chose vulnerability: his hand or a body-for-rent was adequate.

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Taught powerlessness by the wrenching and tearing of every month's full moon; Remus hated to relinquish control.  His own scarred hand and spiraling fantasy took care of unmet needs.

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As surprising and unexpectedly joyful as the sunrise-glistening-frost of icy mornings was their trust in surrendering to their passionate sexual collisions.

 

Comments

[firefly124.livejournal.com]

Wow. That is absolutely excellent.

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much - what lovely comments. *blush* I'm glad you enjoyed.

[cordeliadelayne]

This was wonderfully written. Very good job :D

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much!

[slytherin-lycan.livejournal.com]

I love how you can always capture such emotion with 100 words. Brilliance once again.

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! *blush* What a lovely comment!

[slytherin-lycan.livejournal.com]

ah btw .. editors choice..

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Oh my - can't tell you how thrilled I am! Thanks.