Challenge - Greed

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Title: Never Enough
Challenge: greed
Word Count: 100

 

 

There was never enough time.  Only these greedily grasped moments between all else that needed to be done.

Never enough oxygen, breathing harder and faster, till his chest was about to burst.

Never enough touch, skin meeting skin, calling forth moans and growls from deep within.

Never enough words to speak his longings, desires, dreams.

And afterwards, heart beats slowing to a shared steady rhythm, Remus whispered “Maybe one day, when all this is over, we’ll be able to be together, always together”, and then Severus knew that his greed was shared, and that this after all might be enough.

Comments

Klutz! Apologies!

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Ooops. Some-how managed to post 2 cut-links. Sorry. Not certain how to edit without removing both cut-links.

[nimrod-9.livejournal.com]

Lovely ;)

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It was a bit hurried. As soon as I lay down to sleep, I regretted posting it before I'd re-read & re-written. Silly!

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, very nice.

And welcome to the community! You now have a shiny new author tag :D

It should be easy enough to edit the cut-links, you must have a duplicate code in there somewhere, but you only really need cuts if the drabbles nc-17 or squicky anyway. Don't worry about it this time round.

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks, nice of you to send a welcome message.

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Mm, lovely imagery here. Well done!

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[nehalenia.livejournal.com]

oh, very nice!

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your comment. *grins happily*
Cheers.

Never Enough Drabble

[rowanheart24.livejournal.com]

Brilliant!

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[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks! *grins*
Cheers!

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[rowanheart24.livejournal.com]

You did an awesome job.

Don't second guess yourself with "It was a bit hurried. As soon as I lay down to sleep, I regretted posting it before I'd re-read & re-written. Silly!" Sometimes the best work a person can do is writing something down and not editing/censoring themselves.

I think you did an awesome job and hope you will continue to go far in this community and of course, enjoy yourself!

Would it be ok if I friended you?

Re: Never Enough Drabble

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your encouragement and I would love it if you friended me. I'm friending you back, OK?

Re: Never Enough Drabble

[rowanheart24.livejournal.com]

:D SO friended! I also will friend you over at my fan fic journal if you'd like. . . its timeturner_tobi here on livejournal if you're interested.

Encouragement for creative writing is Mana to the soul!

Those garden gnomes also stole my common sense...!

[red-day-dawning.livejournal.com]

Yay! I've friended both journals - I love the line about garden gnomes stealing your sanity & am fascinated by the notion of having 2 distinct & separate journals.

Re: Those garden gnomes also stole my common sense...!

[rowanheart24.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

The Garden Gnomes struck me as hiliarious when I first read about them in HP Universe, especially when Crookshanks went chasing after the little buggers at the Burrow! LMAO! Happy memories!

Yeah, it's great having two separate journals, one personal one all my fan fic/writings. . .makes it alot easier to find my stories when looking for them. :D

YAY! FRIENDS! Giggle!