Too Many Marks

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Title: Too Many Marks
Author: Cedar
Word Count: 100
Challenge: Strawberries and Cream
Rated: PG-13, I guess



He'd made marks. Too many marks.
“Severus, how am I supposed to hide all of these from my students? Not to mention the staff. My neck looks like a field of strawberries.” Remus was trying on various scarves, to humorous effect.
“I will make an effort to stay below your collar tonight,” said Severus. He walked up behind his panicked lover, wrapped his arms around him from behind, and added one more small bite at the curve of his shoulder.
"More?” Exasperated, Remus leaned into him.
“I have to mark you, Lupin. You’re mine.” Severus’s voice was like heavy cream.


ETA: Wrote a follow-up here

ETA: and continued some more here

Comments

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Oh, most definitely, notice Remus us NOT pulling away from vampy!Snape, just complaining pathetically.
And ooo, I might just have to write the follow-up. *similarly lost in thought now*

[highlystrung.livejournal.com]

Lovely descriptive drabble. ^^

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much!

[nimrod-9.livejournal.com]

Shouldn't Remus be saying "more please"? Your drabble and the s&c are yummy.

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Oh, I think he is. Notice the lean IN. :) Strawberries and cream. Mmmm. Thanks!

[mandolin-1004.livejournal.com]

Hehe, "strawberries and cream." Liked that little bit o' sneakiness (unless it wasn't intended, in which case I still like it).

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! Oh, those strawberries and cream were very intended. :)

[cordeliadelayne]

Very nice and really good use of the prompt :D

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Thanks, and I liked the prompt so much, yay! *g*

[dizilla.livejournal.com]

*hee* We all know Severus does it to panic Lupin. XD Love it.

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Of course! And Lupin loves it. *g* Thanks!

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, the description of Severus' voice... Guh!

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I can hear it too. *melt*