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Author: Bitterfig

Pairing: Severus Snape/Remus Lupin

Word Count: 100

Prompt: “What’s wrong with it?”

Summary: Marauders Era 6th year, post-Shrieking Shack.

Warnings: Slash, a bit of snogging and heavy breathing but nothing graphic. 





“Don’t,” Severus moaned even as he pressed himself harder against Remus.  “This is wrong.”

 

Remus kissed him again with hunger, almost with starvation.    

 

“Tell me, Severus, what’s wrong with it?”  He whispered.  “Are you afraid of me?  You don’t need to be.  Its two weeks till the next full moon.  I won’t hurt you.”

 

“You’re more frightening now then you were as a wolf.  We’re both boys, Lupin.”  He gasped, hands under Remus’s shirt taking in the warmth of his body, starved himself.  “We can’t do this.  We’re not supposed to.” 

 

“When have you ever let that stop you before?”

Date: 2006-08-24 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] innusiq.livejournal.com
Oooh, yeah. I love Marauders Era Snupin. LOVE IT! And Severus, it's called experimenting. Enjoy it ;) Hee-hee!

Date: 2006-08-24 03:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karasu-hime.livejournal.com
Hot damn!!!!!

RRRARRRR

Date: 2006-08-24 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittehkat.livejournal.com
Oh, I really liked it! We can hope nothing'd ever stop Sevvy from snogging Remus, eh? Hahaha.

Date: 2006-08-24 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thewantonvixen.livejournal.com
This is really good. I really really really like it. I don't know why, but perhaps it's because you've created such a nice sence, shown what you think of the characters, developed the realtionship and kept it IC in such a short amount of space. That's true talent.

Date: 2006-08-25 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonlit.livejournal.com
Love them as boys because you know that's when the attraction all started! Lol! This was lovely.

Date: 2006-08-25 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonlit.livejournal.com
Oh and forgot to add - drabbles are quite that challenge aren't they. You really do have to be concise and you've done a great job of that.

Date: 2006-08-25 08:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Very nice. "We're both boys". Hee, well spotted Severus :D

"What's Wrong With It?"

Date: 2006-09-08 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rowanheart24.livejournal.com
MELTS! I love this couple!

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