Too Many Marks

[westernredcedar.livejournal.com]

Title: Too Many Marks
Author: Cedar
Word Count: 100
Challenge: Strawberries and Cream
Rated: PG-13, I guess



He'd made marks. Too many marks.
“Severus, how am I supposed to hide all of these from my students? Not to mention the staff. My neck looks like a field of strawberries.” Remus was trying on various scarves, to humorous effect.
“I will make an effort to stay below your collar tonight,” said Severus. He walked up behind his panicked lover, wrapped his arms around him from behind, and added one more small bite at the curve of his shoulder.
"More?” Exasperated, Remus leaned into him.
“I have to mark you, Lupin. You’re mine.” Severus’s voice was like heavy cream.


ETA: Wrote a follow-up here

ETA: and continued some more here

Comments

[highlystrung.livejournal.com]

Lovely descriptive drabble. ^^

[nimrod-9.livejournal.com]

Shouldn't Remus be saying "more please"? Your drabble and the s&c are yummy.

[mandolin-1004.livejournal.com]

Hehe, "strawberries and cream." Liked that little bit o' sneakiness (unless it wasn't intended, in which case I still like it).

[cordeliadelayne]

Very nice and really good use of the prompt :D

[dizilla.livejournal.com]

*hee* We all know Severus does it to panic Lupin. XD Love it.

[alisanne.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, the description of Severus' voice... Guh!