ext_65994 ([identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] snupin1002007-05-26 09:19 pm

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Title: At the Lakeshore
Author: Cedar
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: #106- Sunshine
Characters: Remus/Severus, Marauders


Although the others had not noticed, the skinny boy in black had been behind them since leaving the exam. Remus’s canid nose was filled with the familiar, heady scent of his sweat under the heavy black robes, now sharpening in the blazing sunshine by the lake. His head was swimming with desire, flashes of the night before- last aisle, restricted section, all lips, hands, teeth- distracting him the precise moment Sirius finally spotted him.
“Excellent. Snivellus.”
The “James, Sirius, leave him alone,” that he owed Severus caught in Remus’s throat. He hid behind his book. The sunshine hurt his eyes.

[identity profile] osmalic.livejournal.com 2007-05-27 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
OUCH.

The end. That one line. Wow, that hurt. OW.

[identity profile] mandolin-1004.livejournal.com 2007-05-27 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Grrr..."If I only had a backbone~!"
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2007-05-28 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, nice last line.

And welcome to the community!

[identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com 2007-05-29 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh dear.
*sigh*