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Author: Bitterfig

Pairing: Severus Snape/Remus Lupin

Word Count: 100

Prompt: “What’s wrong with it?”

Summary: Marauders Era 6^th year, post-Shrieking Shack.

Warnings: Slash, a bit of snogging and heavy breathing but nothing graphic. 

“Don’t,” Severus moaned even as he pressed himself harder against Remus.  “This is wrong.”

 

Remus kissed him again with hunger, almost with starvation.    

 

“Tell me, Severus, what’s wrong with it?”  He whispered.  “Are you afraid of me?  You don’t need to be.  Its two weeks till the next full moon.  I won’t hurt you.”

 

“You’re more frightening now then you were as a wolf.  We’re both boys, Lupin.”  He gasped, hands under Remus’s shirt taking in the warmth of his body, starved himself.  “We can’t do this.  We’re not supposed to.” 

 

“When have you ever let that stop you before?”

Comments

[innusiq.livejournal.com]

Oooh, yeah. I love Marauders Era Snupin. LOVE IT! And Severus, it's called experimenting. Enjoy it ;) Hee-hee!

[karasu-hime.livejournal.com]

Hot damn!!!!!

RRRARRRR

[kittehkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, I really liked it! We can hope nothing'd ever stop Sevvy from snogging Remus, eh? Hahaha.

[thewantonvixen.livejournal.com]

This is really good. I really really really like it. I don't know why, but perhaps it's because you've created such a nice sence, shown what you think of the characters, developed the realtionship and kept it IC in such a short amount of space. That's true talent.

[bitterfic.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much- I�m really getting into drabbles. They�re wicked hard- you have to sketch things in so concisely to stay within 100 words.

[dragonlit.livejournal.com]

Love them as boys because you know that's when the attraction all started! Lol! This was lovely.

[cordeliadelayne]

Very nice. "We're both boys". Hee, well spotted Severus :D

"What's Wrong With It?"

[rowanheart24.livejournal.com]

MELTS! I love this couple!