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[neral-idazmi.livejournal.com]

Title: A Handful Of Snow Down The Trousers
Word Count: 107
Rating: G
Challenge: Snow.
Characters: Remus and Severus.
Authors Notes: Slightly over the word limit, and uberfluff-y (blame it on my ridiculously annoying lovelorn friend who has been going on about her boyfriend ALL evening >:(). Oh, and my idea of past/present tense seems to have gone straight out of the window. Enjoy :P

If the seventeen year-old Lupin had ever had any doubts about whether the time he’d spent persuading Severus to actually come out and enjoy the snow was worth it, they were lost when he saw him smile for the first time.

Despite lycanthropically enhanced senses he hadn’t heard the Slytherin approach. Even he however, noticed the handful of snow down his trousers. Sputtering in outrage, he managed to fish it out, and back Severus up against a tree, tossing the snow from hand to hand with wicked glee.
“I’ve got you now”
Snape smiled and simply replied “You have at that.” before leaning up to kiss him.

Comments

[krissybl.livejournal.com]

*Big Stupid Grin* So adorable. I love every bit of it. And i think lycanthropically is my new favorite word.

“You have at that.”
Absolutely adore how he is still so proper even when pinned against a tree. ok, now i need to stop before my praise becomes longer than this wonderful drabble.

[neral-idazmi.livejournal.com]

Someone actually liked it ?!? *in shock*. Ty soo much :) And yes, lycanthropically is an AWESOME word (even if microsoft word doesn't recognise it as such >:(
Have a nice day :)

Neral

[dizilla.livejournal.com]

Heheheh that's silly and great! Love it. ^_^

[cordeliadelayne]

Best. Title. Ever. :)

[neral-idazmi.livejournal.com]

You don't know the half of it..... the other choices were
"BAcked up against a tree", and
"First Time"
I blame my brain :P

[stoicstella.livejournal.com]

I think this is very cute. The first time I read this something seemed wrong with the first sentence and I couldn't figure out what so I blamed by traitorous brain, but the second time when I found the similar struggle I relised you had a word loose... (heh)

You might want to take another look at that "whether" tis out of place.

otherwise adorable... :D